I've currently been on a hunt for a tone of new and old visual novels to play as I go through them pretty quickly and during my hunt, I stumbled upon this. honestly just by the short description I'm really excited to play its.
Update: honestly, I enjoyed playing the demo for this a lot despite it being short and simple. Of course, I expected it to be short considering it was only a demo though. I loved everything about game so far. the character designs, the music, the story, and everything else was amazing. i love Seth and he's my personal favorite for the time being. I've scrolled through the comments a bit and saw a few people being super hateful and rude for no real reason. I don't think people understand that these types of games take time and effort to make. there is and was no reason to be so hateful. people need to understand that we are all humans even game creators. you shouldn't expect so much from just a simple demo which is honestly just introducing you to the characters. not every demo is going to be a 30–40-minute play through. they are just trying to give you an idea of what it's going to about. other than that, I loved the game and of course it could use improvement but once again its only a demo and I'm sure that when another update is released it will be absolutely amazing!
The constant switch between tenses (from present simple to past simple) in the narration really threw me off and, unfortunately, it kind of ruined the immersion for me. I barely made it past naming the character. I'm sure it's a lovely story, but in its current state it's not for me. I'll certainly check up on it in the future, once it's a little bit more polished ^_^. Best of luck in the meantime!
Hello! I'm very much open for such comments so don't worry! As for android, I think it will take a bit of time for me to figure out on how to make the game available for other platforms such as that and I still have to focus on finishing up the game!
Hi! For some reason, this game isn't working for me. I use Linux and I successfully download it. However, it "launches", opening a browser tab, which has links to the games's files and codes. Please help
First of all, sorry for my bad English, I'm not very used to writing in English, so I'm using google translator, and secondly, I really liked the Game Demo! The character design, the background music, everything is amazing! But, there is a small problem, I cannot go back to where my last Save was, there is no "load" option to load/go back to your last Save, which makes it a little complicated in case we players need to save and exit the middle of the game to do something else, I don't want to sound rude, it's just a detail I noticed, if I downloaded the wrong file without this option, you can let me know that this way I download the right file, sorry for the inconvenience
Man, it's criminal how short it is but I adore the art for the different LIs! I like how different each of them appear to be, especially regarding how they handle the skittish nervous trainwreck MC (they're seriously adorable). I feel like both Seth and Zach have fun teasing MC but Seth is very obvious about it while Zach is very subtle and "gentlemanly" while Simon is equally flustered as MC but getting bolder and bolder.
Not going to lie, I'm very curious about what you mean by supernatural horror because so far from what I've seen in the demo, the setting is modern echoing our own time. The supernatural aspect I'm thinking about is either in a literal sense or that MC is hallucinating or overwhelmed by the situation and they rationalize or their mind conjures terrifying "supernatural" things that make sense to them.
But other to that, I'm very curious to how things turn out. Especially for Zach since with Seth and Simon we get to see how they begin to be attracted to MC. For Zach (in my route) they just bumped into one another, is Zach a hopeless romantic then? That's why he became attracted to MC like all those cliche romance trope? Either way, looking forward to the madness!
Aw man, I cannot wait for the full release. I’m already half white-knuckling it as it is, and we’re not even that deep. This is so cute and eerie at the same time. I both cannot and have to keep going, haha. It’s wonderful. Super well-done. I really cannot wait!
Simon is such a babygirl material that he could break my neck and i wouldn't mind...however, IS SIMON DOUBLE FACED? now that would definitely make me paranoid.
Still, good luck with the development of this game, I love the designs too much!
looking forward to the full release! I admit, I have a fondness for twinks like Avery so I was half hoping he gets a route too, but the present LIs are all very loveable in their own way so it's all good!
Love the demo! I actually love how mc is on the softer side, we all aren't rude to people we just meet lmao, wild to see such a rude comment on a game like this. Anyway, I really enjoyed it and I can't wait to play more!
I don/t know if i/ve already commented here, but I just replayed the game and I cannot express just how much I can/t wait for the update. Literally fangirling (i/m fanning myself and everything) over two dudes here. My soft boy and my resting bitch face boy. Take your time obviously, I understand that when you/re rushed, a hobby becomes a chore, but just know this is already starting to look N I C E A S A Q U I E T EV EN IN G AL O NE WITH TEA AN D M US IC.
(it/s way too early and i/ve had 3 cups of coffee and tea, so don/t mind the weird tones of this comment)
Fuck this game! I couldn't even get to see all the guys, the MC is so skittish and soft! There is no way she works retail, and I HIGHLY suspect this was written by a teenager who's never interacted with people outside their school. Don't waste your time playing, there are better games out there, FAR BETTER, and your time is worth so much more than this hot garbage!
Hi there, developer here. The fact you said "You haven't seen any of the boys" is honestly a huge conundrum to me considering this is a demo of the game (and introductory of the LIs and the surroundings. Showing Seth, Simon and Zachary.) You have yet to see the whole thing yet and assuming this is what my game has as a whole? Do be patient.
Again, this is just a demo as I am currently making another update to this game until the full release.
Hey, could you actually use your words to give a valid critique instead of being an asshole? This serves no other reason than to come off as hateful and rude. Like you say they never interact with anyone but what you wrote dead ass comes off as friendless behavior and like you're the teenager LOL
If you don't like it and have no real feedback to give then just idk go outside and touch grass. Don't be a dick online LOL
I hope you realize that the MC is a character, just because they're not confrontational or come off as strong doesn't mean some people can't relate to them. There are different range of personalities working in costumer services. Having experience working in retailing, I am not the most confrontational person so I can somewhat relate to the MC, since I don't feel safe/ need to be friends with every costumers/ person or strike up every conversations, my safety and concerns comes first if I sense any hidden intentions. This also apply outside of the workforce too.
This is simply straight up flaming and hatreds. Next time, educate yourself with 'how to constructively criticizing someone'. Besides, this is roughly a demo. Raw concept, i'd say.
I played this game a while ago and I still can't wait for the next update. This game keeps coming back to my mind and I haven't been able to keep the thought of it out of my head.
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its really good, i really like it. amaizing!!!!!
cai i ask when is going to be the next update? i really cant wait haha
is there only one ending?
In the final release, I planned to have 2 endings per routes ( A good ending & bad ending per LI). So far, this is just the first demo. ^^;
I've currently been on a hunt for a tone of new and old visual novels to play as I go through them pretty quickly and during my hunt, I stumbled upon this. honestly just by the short description I'm really excited to play its.
Update: honestly, I enjoyed playing the demo for this a lot despite it being short and simple. Of course, I expected it to be short considering it was only a demo though. I loved everything about game so far. the character designs, the music, the story, and everything else was amazing. i love Seth and he's my personal favorite for the time being. I've scrolled through the comments a bit and saw a few people being super hateful and rude for no real reason. I don't think people understand that these types of games take time and effort to make. there is and was no reason to be so hateful. people need to understand that we are all humans even game creators. you shouldn't expect so much from just a simple demo which is honestly just introducing you to the characters. not every demo is going to be a 30–40-minute play through. they are just trying to give you an idea of what it's going to about. other than that, I loved the game and of course it could use improvement but once again its only a demo and I'm sure that when another update is released it will be absolutely amazing!
The constant switch between tenses (from present simple to past simple) in the narration really threw me off and, unfortunately, it kind of ruined the immersion for me. I barely made it past naming the character. I'm sure it's a lovely story, but in its current state it's not for me. I'll certainly check up on it in the future, once it's a little bit more polished ^_^. Best of luck in the meantime!
您好，我正在使用翻译来写这篇文章。有些部分可能不是很流畅，但我真的很喜欢这项工作。一开始，每个男主看起来都很纯洁好看，还没看完。然而，我真的很喜欢这个名字和赋予男人突出个性特征的颜色。
Hi,sorry if i am wasting you time but this gonna be released for Android? i really wanted to play your game :(
Hello! I'm very much open for such comments so don't worry! As for android, I think it will take a bit of time for me to figure out on how to make the game available for other platforms such as that and I still have to focus on finishing up the game!
oh thanks for the aswer by the way your game is awesome such a good work you made keep like that :D (sorry for my bad inglish i from brazil)
I very much second the question above. I'd love to play this on my phone cuz my laptop hates me. But take your time. 😇♥️
This was such a good first taste of the game. I want to devour the whole thing already!!
Hi! For some reason, this game isn't working for me. I use Linux and I successfully download it. However, it "launches", opening a browser tab, which has links to the games's files and codes. Please help
Aí meu Deus o Simon é tão fofo!!!!! Eu acho que ele seria um ótimo yandere haha!!
Estou ansiosa pela continuação!
The art is beautiful omg!!
You did such a great job making this keep up the good work!! :3
Thank you so much for providing this experience! hehe c:
Do you have an estimate on when the next part will come out?>
bro i need this
Honestly I can't wait to get this once the full one releases
IM BACK TO THIS
OH MY GOD im obsessed with the artstyle.. i can't wait to see more <33
why is seth so... yk...
FRRR OMG
I love this. I NEED MORE. I"M HOOKED
give seth tentacles
tentacle seth would be a dream come true 🙏
real. I NEED IT
Simon is adorable, I'm in.
Hope to see more of this!
This demo was definitely interesting, I really cannot wait for more updates, and the full release. Good luck on it! :)
I ENJOY THIS SO FREAKING MUCH, SIMON IS SO BBG GIRL LIKE ARGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG WOOF WOOF WWOOF
I'LL TRY THIS OUT NOWW 🗣️
Hello Mr Ruby eyes >3>
SIMON IS SO BABY GIRL
The realest
I enjoyed this demo, sad that it is so short, but I'm looking forward to future updates and, hopefully, full release whenever it happens.\o/
Man, it's criminal how short it is but I adore the art for the different LIs! I like how different each of them appear to be, especially regarding how they handle the skittish nervous trainwreck MC (they're seriously adorable). I feel like both Seth and Zach have fun teasing MC but Seth is very obvious about it while Zach is very subtle and "gentlemanly" while Simon is equally flustered as MC but getting bolder and bolder.
Not going to lie, I'm very curious about what you mean by supernatural horror because so far from what I've seen in the demo, the setting is modern echoing our own time. The supernatural aspect I'm thinking about is either in a literal sense or that MC is hallucinating or overwhelmed by the situation and they rationalize or their mind conjures terrifying "supernatural" things that make sense to them.
But other to that, I'm very curious to how things turn out. Especially for Zach since with Seth and Simon we get to see how they begin to be attracted to MC. For Zach (in my route) they just bumped into one another, is Zach a hopeless romantic then? That's why he became attracted to MC like all those cliche romance trope? Either way, looking forward to the madness!
Aw man, I cannot wait for the full release. I’m already half white-knuckling it as it is, and we’re not even that deep. This is so cute and eerie at the same time. I both cannot and have to keep going, haha. It’s wonderful. Super well-done. I really cannot wait!
Simon is such a babygirl material that he could break my neck and i wouldn't mind...however, IS SIMON DOUBLE FACED? now that would definitely make me paranoid.
Still, good luck with the development of this game, I love the designs too much!
REAL HES SO BABYGIRL
Can't wait for more :>
Liked it so far but there is no "load" option tho
me waiting for the other route
looking forward to the full release! I admit, I have a fondness for twinks like Avery so I was half hoping he gets a route too, but the present LIs are all very loveable in their own way so it's all good!
Love the demo! I actually love how mc is on the softer side, we all aren't rude to people we just meet lmao, wild to see such a rude comment on a game like this. Anyway, I really enjoyed it and I can't wait to play more!
I don/t know if i/ve already commented here, but I just replayed the game and I cannot express just how much I can/t wait for the update. Literally fangirling (i/m fanning myself and everything) over two dudes here. My soft boy and my resting bitch face boy. Take your time obviously, I understand that when you/re rushed, a hobby becomes a chore, but just know this is already starting to look N I C E A S A Q U I E T EV EN IN G AL O NE WITH TEA AN D M US IC.
(it/s way too early and i/ve had 3 cups of coffee and tea, so don/t mind the weird tones of this comment)
hmm i wish their was a patreon :(
you can save but not load... make things make sense
Thank you for pointing this out! This'll be fixed once the update is done!
Fuck this game! I couldn't even get to see all the guys, the MC is so skittish and soft! There is no way she works retail, and I HIGHLY suspect this was written by a teenager who's never interacted with people outside their school. Don't waste your time playing, there are better games out there, FAR BETTER, and your time is worth so much more than this hot garbage!
Hi there, developer here. The fact you said "You haven't seen any of the boys" is honestly a huge conundrum to me considering this is a demo of the game (and introductory of the LIs and the surroundings. Showing Seth, Simon and Zachary.) You have yet to see the whole thing yet and assuming this is what my game has as a whole? Do be patient.
Again, this is just a demo as I am currently making another update to this game until the full release.
Hey, could you actually use your words to give a valid critique instead of being an asshole? This serves no other reason than to come off as hateful and rude. Like you say they never interact with anyone but what you wrote dead ass comes off as friendless behavior and like you're the teenager LOL
If you don't like it and have no real feedback to give then just idk go outside and touch grass. Don't be a dick online LOL
hold up, did you leave this comment because the creator doesn't like YBF?
edit: oh my god you did!! that's so embarrassing
dude, you look like an utter dick. your review is unhelpful and does not provide constructive criticism to make the game better.
I hope you realize that the MC is a character, just because they're not confrontational or come off as strong doesn't mean some people can't relate to them. There are different range of personalities working in costumer services. Having experience working in retailing, I am not the most confrontational person so I can somewhat relate to the MC, since I don't feel safe/ need to be friends with every costumers/ person or strike up every conversations, my safety and concerns comes first if I sense any hidden intentions. This also apply outside of the workforce too.
This is simply straight up flaming and hatreds. Next time, educate yourself with 'how to constructively criticizing someone'. Besides, this is roughly a demo. Raw concept, i'd say.
TRY PLAYING IT NOW SUKI! IT HAS ALL THREE OF EM.
I played this game a while ago and I still can't wait for the next update. This game keeps coming back to my mind and I haven't been able to keep the thought of it out of my head.